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*FAIR WARNING: THIS IS A HORROR STORY*
Hello, all
This is a commission written for distressed-mess
...She asked for a horror story, starring her hero-in-distress character, Dex.
(Again, to my regular readers: This IS a very graphic Horror Story. Unless you like that genre, you should pass this story by.)
Since I don't want to give the plot away, I will leave it at that.
Dex and Val belong to
All other characters belong to me.
Dex and Val's first meeting with Oksana Belitrov: circledreams.deviantart.com/ar…
Crystal Lily's first appearance was in in an old story of mine: circledreams.deviantart.com/ar…
Hello, all
This is a commission written for distressed-mess
...She asked for a horror story, starring her hero-in-distress character, Dex.(Again, to my regular readers: This IS a very graphic Horror Story. Unless you like that genre, you should pass this story by.)
Since I don't want to give the plot away, I will leave it at that.
Dex and Val belong to
All other characters belong to me.
Dex and Val's first meeting with Oksana Belitrov: circledreams.deviantart.com/ar…
Crystal Lily's first appearance was in in an old story of mine: circledreams.deviantart.com/ar…
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That was a really nice story.
The beginning adds tension in the classic "where we are and how we got there" style.
The mystery about the killer...
The duo splitting up...
Dex having to "be a hero" even though Crystal is telling him to get out of here!
Crystal's dialogue in general...
I was convinced that the big Guitarman was the bad guy until the reveal.
The dark atmosphere in general...
Dex going from his sassy demeanor to a GOOD BOY...
And the ending was a good relief.
The beginning adds tension in the classic "where we are and how we got there" style.
The mystery about the killer...
The duo splitting up...
Dex having to "be a hero" even though Crystal is telling him to get out of here!
Crystal's dialogue in general...
I was convinced that the big Guitarman was the bad guy until the reveal.
The dark atmosphere in general...
Dex going from his sassy demeanor to a GOOD BOY...
And the ending was a good relief.